Proverbs: How they’re put together, a brief lesson on “Synonymous Parallelism.”

Prov 27.17
Synonymous parallelism is when two ideas brought together are saying the same thing in different words. The second line often repeats the first line in somewhat altered form to express the truth in maximum clarity. There may or may not be a conjunction. Some examples:
Prov 16.28
A perverse man spreads strife,
And a slanderer separates intimate friends.
Prov 18.20
With the fruit of a man’s mouth his stomach will be satisfied;
He will be satisfied with the product of his lips.
Note: It is possible to omit part of the Proverb, and sometimes subjects or verbs are omitted.
Prov 14.19
The evil will bow down before the good,
And the wicked at the gates of the righteous.
Note: Sometimes the parallelism can be indentified only by attending to the whole ideas which are brought together.
Prov 10.23
Doing wickedness is like sport to a fool,
And so is wisdom to a man of understanding.
Note: The characters are certainly in contrast. Their activities contrast. Nevertheless, the “ideas” of both are that this activity is sport for this person. Bringing the lines together makes the point that a fool and a wise man have something in common; they each do something for the pure enjoyment of it!
Now, our look at Prov 10.2-3 . . .
Ill gotten gains do not profit,
But righteousness delivers from death.
The Lord will not allow the righteous to hunger
But He will reject the craving of the wicked.
Parallelism Examined |
|||
A-2a |
B-2b |
B1 3a |
A1 3b |
| (treasures of wickedness)
Ill-gotten gains |
righteousness | Lord | He |
| does not profit
(delivers to) |
(profits)
delivers from |
(does not reject)
will not allow |
wicked |
| righteous | wicked | ||
| (death/separation) | death | (cravings)
hunger |
(to hunger)
craving |
First, let’s look at the parts, what do you think of regarding:
ill-gotten gains? Tend to be short-term. Look at Luke 12.13-21. Note in Luke12.19, money made life, I can control my life! A major lack of humility! Note Luke 12.20, wrong currency for life! Aslo note Jesus never even intimated this money came from evil sources!
does not profit? Even with all the “gains,” you’re bankrupt in what matters for life, what you want most!
righteousness? This person practices humility. Puts the Lord first and lives it out!
wicked? These are not just criminals.
death? Untimely separation from life! Long-term consequences!
rejects? The original is an emotional word meaning to thrust away, push away! The one “rejected” lives unfulfilled, never “attaining” because the Lord moves against you!
hunger? Interestingly, hunger can be satisfied. It’s not just an extrinsic motivation for you must determine your character to direct your consequences! Satisfaction really relates to our character!
craving? This is seeking but never attaining! It’s a powerful word of emptiness!
References to consider
Prov 13.11; Prov 21.6; Prov 16.2; Prov 11.4; Psalm 37.23-26; Prov 4.7-8
Sharpening for my life today . . .
Notice that this Proverb (as are many Proverbs) is written in the third person form. The exhortation leaves the choice to the learner. You must choose and evaluate yourself as wise or foolish!
Outside forces do not determine character, they only display what is there! Circumstances are not to be the controlling factors in your life! Here is where real wisdom growth takes place as you take charge (through God’s Wisdom) and make responsible choices.
It’s your character that’s being formed, not just your behavior!
Putting the Lord first in life has long-term consequences, consequences established by my character.
How important it is to have a long-view of life! So, where do I, how do I, need to lengthen my view of life so I can genuinely gain in the things of the Lord?

